tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-789709642756849562.post7265224155731578948..comments2023-03-16T05:30:01.573-07:00Comments on lycralyricist: THE INCORRECT CORRECTED - By Ragini RamanathanUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-789709642756849562.post-13829688180783217742008-08-09T21:45:00.000-07:002008-08-09T21:45:00.000-07:00though you could improve it slightly by spacing ou...though you could improve it slightly by spacing out the stanzas a little bit and you should put a comma after gays...Marshwiggle23https://www.blogger.com/profile/02791345678009973226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-789709642756849562.post-88459536500124272272008-08-09T21:41:00.000-07:002008-08-09T21:41:00.000-07:00good one in terms of both what it says and the str...good one in terms of both what it says and the structureMarshwiggle23https://www.blogger.com/profile/02791345678009973226noreply@blogger.com